Pitch 2




Reflection/Changes:

  • The most important feedback I received from the last video was to add energy and enthusiasm to the presentation.  I tried doing so, but I'm still working on it!  Talking to a camera feels a bit weird and excitedly talking to my phone takes some getting used to.
  • Though my last video was only 8 seconds over the 90 second mark, someone said I should try to shorten it up, so I did.  I cut out the part about getting paid by the utility company as that can be a bit confusing.  Instead, I tried focusing on return on investment (ROI) as the attractive force.  The aim here was to present enough interesting information so the listener will want to learn more.  At that point, I'll have more time to elaborate on all the benefits of solar energy.

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